Here are the corrections from yesterday's grammar quiz. I have put extra notes in brackets.
Do you like Would you like to work in one of the world's largest business businesses? Don't miss this exciting business opportunity.
Our Corporation wants to broad broaden our activity in the New Zealand. ("Broad" is an adjective, "broaden" is the verb).
We are
seeking for self-motivated worker workers to help us expand our business in New
Zealand sector.
in the New Zealand sector.
To get in candidates: To apply candidates must: or
Essential requirements:
- 18+ age Be over 18 or 18+ (without "age")
- Must be proficiency in computer, be proficient with or have proficiency in computers / computer packages especially in MS Office (Word, Excel, Outlook)
- Part & Full time positions, Work-from-Home positions 2-6 hours per day
- Bases salary ranges Base salaries range from or the base salary range is from 5000 to 6000 NZD monthly depending on working shift. shifts / which shifts you work / shift hours
- Candidates must be smart and motivated.
Customer service and administrative positions are available.
No relocation is essential!
necessary!
Interested person people should write back respond to this e-mail.
("write back" is too casual. This is a formal advertisement).
Thank you for your interest.
Notes
We don't use the article "the" with countries, unless they are groups of islands or states.
New Zealand
China
Korea
Japan
not the Japan
but:
the United States
the United Kingdom
The Philippines
The Caribbean
The Kingdom of Saudi Arabia
Prepositions:
These are difficult - you need to memorize, study and revise which prepositions go with which verbs.
Look for something
Seek something (no preposition)
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